Sorry I’m not doing a Kissing Day/Belated kissing day post.
This is just the usual teaser but one I had great fun writing.
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Sorry I’m not doing a Kissing Day/Belated kissing day post.
This is just the usual teaser but one I had great fun writing.
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Chai and Chapters 
Oh wow, I was not expecting the last bit. I want to know who the guy is! And the last line is awesome. Cliffhanger? AHH!!! lolBut really great snip!
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Oh, wow. I love motorbikes — there are a lot of scenes in my book about them. Karla's right that this is a massive cliffhanger ending. Loved the tension in this. Great teaser 😀
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OMG!YOU TEASEEE!My heart jumped into my throat when I read the end XD
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Oh. This is great!I want to know more~!
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I like this line: \”My general perception of strangers –rather, all living, breathing people –borders on paranoia.\” Funny, but it tells me a lot about her. Also, this whole scene is so tense and I really, really want to know how it ends!
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Awesome! Very good teaser. I want to know how it ends too.
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Oh, I loved this. What's going to happen next? I want to know.I so totally get her paranoia. I tend to think like that too. Very nice.
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Thanks for your comment babay!Eek my heart was pounding here!!! Her voice is so clear, I can see her perfectly.
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I can feel her paranoia and fear – great snip and your MC has a great voice. It comes through very well. 🙂
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Nice snip! Great tension and inner dialogue–also awesome job on making the men uber creepers lol
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Wonderful! I could see the scene unfolding, and I could feel all your MC's nervousness. Awesome, awesome tension 😀
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What a tease you are! Very tense. Those men gave me the creeps!
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Oh, you lovelies! XD
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This is awesome. I was totally hooked. At first I thought it was going in one direction, but then it completely changed. Lots of tension too.
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