TEASER #3 : Breaking Away Published on February 23, 2010 by Bidisha @ Chai and Chapters *vamoosh* Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Like this:Like Loading... Related
I'm definitely agreeing on the dialogue. I love the banter and how she walks away from him at the end of the snip. LikeLike Reply
The dialogue's flippin' great. The interaction between Carter and the MC is intriguing. Nice tease! LikeLike Reply
YAY YOUR BACK!I'm in love with the voice, and the pacing of this. I was totally hooked.And great dialogue- it felt really honest and just RIGHT. LikeLike Reply
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love the dialog an how she sticks her fingers in her ears to walk away!
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Yay! I missed your teases. I love your dialogue!! It's so real.
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Cool, Bee! The dialogue is indeed lovely! 🙂
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love the interchange here. 'you're so full of yourself.' 'aren't you?' perfection!
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Great interraction! Loved it.
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Great dialogue, like everyone else has said. I'm definitely intrigued.
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I love the dialogue and interaction! I'd love to see where this goes 🙂
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I'm definitely agreeing on the dialogue. I love the banter and how she walks away from him at the end of the snip.
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The dialogue's flippin' great. The interaction between Carter and the MC is intriguing. Nice tease!
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YAY YOUR BACK!I'm in love with the voice, and the pacing of this. I was totally hooked.And great dialogue- it felt really honest and just RIGHT.
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I like this. It's got this edgy yet sweet feel to it.-HJ/Jaece
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Great dialogue, though i wished you'd posted more
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The dialogue is soooo fluid and realistic, and quite addicting 😉
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I'm so intrigued! Great teaser! And lovely dialogue!
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I love that one line-\”That you crave attention and hate it too\”…NICE…:)
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