22 thoughts on “TEASER. Hells yes.

  1. wow this is really powerful. it makes wonder what happened last summer and what's going on in this scene (and the current summer).awesome job!

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  2. First, purple hair and mint icecream are awesome! Now I want icecream.I love the voice in this and the description is very vivid. While I am not a fan of sand, I could feel it between my toes when the MC walked to the shack.I'm curious to know what's going on.

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  3. I did comment, but for some reason I think maybe my comment got lost somehow. Your teaser is amazing. Your MC's voice is very touching. Man, can't wait to read more

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  4. Wow this is really great! I love how you portray your character and the images of the beach are just awesome! This is a really great tease. πŸ™‚

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  5. I loved this image \”I push my feet into the sand, loving how the little grains snake around my toes, then fall out of the gaps.\” Nicely done!

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